The bush tramp
Bang!!!! My mum dumped a humongous pile of leaves, branches and supple jack next to a old shaggy tree where twigs had been blown down by the strong winds onto soft muddy ground. We were at our unties mums batch with our cousins. My mum and I were collecting up all the leaves and twigs from the tree that fall down before we got here.we were collecting it all up into one big pile and the big pieces we used for firewood. we started putting all the twigs and leaves onto our little dump that we had made. we tried bouncing on the dump to squish it all down, and we found that it was a little bouncy. We snapped a few sticks off the tree and put them on to make it even more bouncy. It slowly got bigger and bigger.We added a few more bamboo on and another layer of leaves to cover the bamboo just to give it a finishing touch.
That tramp was fun to bounce on! Who ever knew that stacking tree parts could turn into a fun game? Thanks for sharing your story.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE that you've got capital letters at the start over every sentence - wow! Maybe you could work on creating some separate paragraphs to interest the reader. Your spelling and descriptive words were great too :)
WOW good story Cameron i always wanted to know whats next!!!!!!!!!!! WOW
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